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Sunday, October 29, 2017

It was a cold winter day...... (Story Board Writing) - Lusia Pahulu

It was a cold Winter Day................

On a cold winter day, my family and I was going down town to get some groceries. When I was driving to town, my parents and my siblings were discussing about how many degrees was it yesterday, I was thinking about the one thing that I really missed. I asked to myself, why can’t I just be in the beach watching the sea hovering the warm yellow sun.............

2 comments:

  1. Wow lusia
    This is a great start. I also like how you added a cold & freezing picture's to it because it relates to the story.

    I will also continue reading your magnificent story.
    Keep it up!

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    1. Thank you soo much for your feedback! I truly Appreciate it!! I did this in the weekends, just to improve my writing skills for our writing test! Good luck on our test online!!!

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